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The feedback I was given was very encouraging. Many people liked the uniqueness of my business plan. This gave me confidence in knowing that is not just myself that thinks this is a good idea worth exploring. In addition, they commented on my hand motions reflecting that I was genuinely enthusiastic about my plan. However, there was a suggestion to describe a little more about the revenue versus the expenditures. I made sure to add more details about that this time around. I was lucky enough to be given all great pieces of feedback that I can implement into my pitch that will make it improve.
What I chose to change is add a section dedicated to explaining where revenue comes from and what the main expenditures are. To stay around the 90-second mark I had to shorten the attention grabber. I originally ask four questions but now I ask only three.
Hi Trenton,
ReplyDeleteI think you got some awesome feedback on your idea, and as you mentioned, there are definitely ways to implement them to your idea. I think it's important for not just entrepreneurs, but anyone in business to remain open to criticism and move in a positive direction with the feedback they are given. Some people outright reject others' opinions and that is no way to conduct business, so it's great that you are so open to new ideas.
Hi Trenton,
ReplyDeleteVery great pitch! You look so professional and I can tell you are very confident in this video and that is a great attribute for a person. Not everybody is comfortable speaking in front of a camera but you did it naturally without even hesitating. You seems to be really interested on your idea which is great for an entrepreneur.